Happiness is important in life. Why it is difficult to define? What are some important factors to achieve happiness.
It is undisputed that happiness plays an important role in people's life. Different people have different perceptions regarding the definition of happiness. Here are, several factors consider to accomplish happiness.
There are manifold reasons making happiness hard to be defined. First and the foremost, variation in attitudes of people creates a tough job to explain happiness. To demonstrate, people have different satisfaction level, due to which similar or same reason does not create a happy moment for all of them. Taking a real life example into consideration, a affluent person need luxurious place to live and fancy lavish food to eat, definitely make his/her life beautiful. In contrast, people from middle class can be easily satisfied. they simply need a stable job that could provide shelter, food and cloth to their families. Consequently, most of the people have different explanation of happiness.
On the other hand, ambitious people can create exultation in their life. People without aim or goal, have same sort of days continuously for their incarnation. So they could create different sorts of happiness in their life. For instance, post graduates aim to achieve an 8 band score. If they accomplish their aim, then obviously, become a happy moment for them.
To recapitulate, undeniably, people will have a problem while defining happiness. But, personally, people should find their happiness by staying grateful for what they have
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider accomplishing'.
Suggestion: consider accomplishing
...of happiness. Here are, several factors consider to accomplish happiness. There are manifold reason...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a real life example into consideration, a affluent person need luxurious place to...
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Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...m middle class can be easily satisfied. they simply need a stable job that could pro...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s by staying grateful for what they have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, regarding, so, then, while, for instance, in contrast, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88582826424 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622807017544 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4074725244 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.6470588235 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4117647059 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178355803046 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622613337558 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054793307944 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125431304423 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587867532002 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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