Today more and more tourists are visiting places where the conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
The territories that cannot easily be reached by most visitors, are increasing popularity as the tourist distinctions nowadays. A whole new level challenge is the major attractive factor for these places and in this essay, the pros and cons of travelling to the locations with tough terrains will be explained.
Firstly, the major benefit of travelling to these locations is the opportunity to explore a whole new environment that cannot be achievable in every day life. In addition to extraordinary scenery, the visitors can have a feeling of accomplishment since the distinctions are too hard to be reached by many people. After travelling, they can also share the experiences in the society which seems to be the most enjoyable part for many people.
Despite of advantages, there are drawbacks behind the concept of travelling the tough territories. First of all, the trip is dangerous and even risks the life of the travelers in some cases. In reality, many adventurers feels that it is not worth to risk their life in travelling during the midway of the trip when they face the difficulties and challenges. For instance, the complaints that the accomplishments are not rewarding compared to their expectations, are commonly feed-backed to the tourism companies which arrange the trip with hard territories.
To conclude, while some people prefer the advantages of travelling to a new challenging places, others cannot withstand the difficulties behind the adventure. However, as many of the young adults like challenging in 21st century, the tour to difficult distinctions will still be increasingly demanding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...w environment that cannot be achievable in every day life. In addition to extraordinary scen...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
...ages of travelling to a new challenging places, others cannot withstand the difficulti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33073929961 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1421480261 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544747081712 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4794961473 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.545454545 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0491389341472 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0185189662703 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210230926872 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0328621289443 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287718705221 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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