In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and atrting university studies.
Discuss the advantage and disadvantaged for young people who decide to do this.
Some countries encourage young people who decide to work or to travel for a year after they have finished high school before they go university study.
I believe that such an opportunity gives to the future students some of the time to relax and find yourself and as well to find their appropriate way of further choice of their profession.
As an advantage for these categories that all will get experience in different factors. Firstly, the people who is going to get a rest will find how to communicate with others in different conditions, so, as examples, youngs will understand how to behave in finding a correct path of their trip, how to sort out difficulties in the communication between the wide range of different cultures, and will form inner private characteristics of themselves such as sense of purpose, sociability, confidence, and others.
For the guys who decided to find a job, they may get a familiar with the difficulties of chosen profession, therefore such experience as being a part of a team, an opportunity of responsibility for the work, knowing technical processes will be helpful in the selecting of their university study.
However, we could mark the disadvantages of this possessions. Young people can not understand the meaning of such a break between steps of study and may discontinue their educational process after the highest school. In such cases as the result, might be, not finished degree and people have to agree to go for a less payment work. As an example, already employed people wish to get more money and later to create a family and easygoing people got used traveling and unwillingly back to study.
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94604316547 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93622365418 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.409179962 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.777777778 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334921066315 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143800190773 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131838138921 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200467703878 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167674005856 0.056905535591 295% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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