People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Sentence: Specific mayor will change people to became person of specialist mayor.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to to and became

Sentence: For example, one person take mayor laws so he will became a lawyer man or a lawyer woman.
Description: The fragment person take mayor is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace take with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular

Sentence: People who be sign in university will get new knowledge and increasing knowledge.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by a verb 'to be', infinitive or imperative
Suggestion: Refer to who and be

Sentence: In university, students are going to feel different about the method of learn in there, students will get new friends and they will get new habits.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to of and learn

Sentence: For example, students get new learning method in university.likewise, lecture gives lesson just every period unlike when students learn at elementary school, junior high school or senior high school that learn every day.
Description: The fragment that learn every is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace learn with verb, past tense

flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.858 7.5
No. of Different Words: 144 200
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 357 350
No. of Characters: 1770 1500
No. of Different Words: 144 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.347 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.958 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.756 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.858 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.37 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.378 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.521 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.175 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5