Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Today's world is changing at such a fast pace that keeping a eye on everything around the world is really impossible. That's why most of people in today's world trust media as their own eye and beleive whatever they present to them. Now, the world is full of media houses that telecast news all over the time and whoever they choose as their prime target to criticise get affected in a very bad manner. Author's claim that being a hero in today's world is no longer possible because of the media houses. As a eye of the people it is prime duty of the media to think and analyze each and every aspect of someone's life before they select thier prime target. But, after having all of these hurdles we can't completely say that anyone can't be regarded as a hero.
At first, take the example of the Nadia Murad , a woman that was kept under the captured victims of ISIS, the terrorist group that captured her for a complete duration of 3 months and raped multiple times. But she kept her hopes high and was then rescuced by the American soldiers in a mission in Iraq. Later in the year of 2018, she was awarded Noble Peace Prize for her stength and the movement she started after getting rescued for the welfare of the woman in Iraq. She is even now considered as a Hero by lot of the people around the world.
Now, take the example of Former Chief- Minister of Tamil Nadu, India "Jaylalita". She was admired by a lot of people for the work she had done in the field of minimum food wage and job facilities for the people of the state. Even after her death she was scrutnised for some curruption charges but after all that the people of Tamil Nadu considered her a Hero.
At last, take the example of Brack Obama, Former President of the United States of America. He was considered as a Hero by a lot many people around the world for his excellent work in the field of prohibiting countries from making more Nuclear weapons. He also worked a lot in the field of peace and was awarded Noble Peace Prize in 2014 for his contributions around the world. Even after he was criticised a lot by the media for his some other policies in the country. But some people even now consider him as their role model.
All in all, I would like to say that it's not impossible for someone to become a role model for others in todays world. But the effect of media is also very real. So, the media need to perform it's duties very neutrally. Also, it is the responsibility of the people to understand and wait for the Judiciary judgement if someone is getting criticised by the media.Not to trust on media too easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...anging at such a fast pace that keeping a eye on everything around the world is r...
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Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... around the world is really impossible. Thats why most of people in todays world trus...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...e world is really impossible. Thats why most of people in todays world trust media as their ow...
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Line 1, column 503, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ossible because of the media houses. As a eye of the people it is prime duty of t...
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Line 1, column 694, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t, after having all of these hurdles we cant completely say that anyone cant be rega...
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Line 1, column 726, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...dles we cant completely say that anyone cant be regarded as a hero. At first, tak...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rst, take the example of the Nadia Murad , a woman that was kept under the capture...
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Line 8, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...eone is getting criticised by the media.Not to trust on media too easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40456431535 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38010066682 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464730290456 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4439779194 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22727272727 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140284768149 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478998328458 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568232074968 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793387199528 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317532120242 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 12.1639044944 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.