Write a letter to a company where you appeared for an interview, asking them about the result. Write why do you think the interview went well and why do you need to know the result.
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is to bring to your kind notice that I appeared for an interview for the post of 'Medical Administrative Head' in your company a few days ago. I was informed that the results for the same would be announced within a week. However, it has been a fortnight now, and I haven't received any update regarding the results.
I am hopeful about securing this job since I feel I am the right candidate for this job. I have an experience of 7 years in this particular field. I also qualify on the mandatory criterion of having 3 years of experience in a corporate hospital. Since, I have worked with 'Grey Sloan Memorial Hospital' for three years, I feel I am the right candidate for this job. Also, my personal traits as mentioned in my resume are in synchronization with the goals and objectives of your company.
I hereby request you to kindly provide me with the result as soon as possible since I have a flight to Egypt in a few days. I wish to be a part of a community program in Egypt if I am not selected for this job in your company. If am selected I shall postpone this community program for 2 years, and will join your company in a stipulated period of time.
Thanking you,
Yours truly
Shalvi Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ver, it has been a fortnight now, and I havent received any update regarding the resul...
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Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... any update regarding the results. I am hopeful about securing this job since...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce of 7 years in this particular field. I also qualify on the mandatory criterion...
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Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... will join your company in a stipulated period of time. Thanking you, Yours truly Sha...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ulated period of time. Thanking you, Yours truly Shalvi Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41048034934 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64439957393 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56768558952 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6407788919 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127231323829 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481326530954 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421154506685 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862264781291 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382160989669 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.