You have been accepted to study at an overseas university, but feel a little anxious about living
and studying in an unfamiliar environment.
Write to the university’s student union. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Explain your interests
• Enquire about any relevant social clubs you might be able to join
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform that I am an international student going to join Conestoga college very soon. As being an outsider i am bit anxious about the facilities and amenities in the surrounding environment. In Conestoga my student Id is 8620866 and my email is lakhbirmalhi68@gmail.com.
firstly i would like to share about my interests and hobbies. I am fun and nature loving personality so it will be a great help if you could explain me about the nearby visiting sites. On other side, i am coming here for study, so i do not know exactly about provision of study resources like libraries and student centers.
Adding values in my interested things, i am an extrovert individual.Here, In India, i am going to social clubs,fitness gyms, public halls and even attending some game courts and i hope that I will be having access to same services while migrating there in Canada. Getting pre-visiting information will make me little nervous d confident about the environment that i am going to join.
Looking forward to hear soon from you.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-12-14 | Lakhbir kaur | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ng environment. In Conestoga my student Id is 8620866 and my email is lakhbirmalhi...
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...l is lakhbirmalhi68@gmail.com. firstly i would like to share about my interests ...
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...e nearby visiting sites. On other side, i am coming here for study, so i do not k...
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Suggestion:
...he environment that i am going to join. Looking forward to hear soon from you.
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Suggestion: to hearing
... am going to join. Looking forward to hear soon from you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87222222222 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27057117374 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.332412516 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150304003647 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648844696686 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328627003911 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850695983504 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344648949145 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.