Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people
should have freedom to do any sports or activity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some people think that governments should impose an official ban on dangerous sports because of its danger, the others believe that people should have the right to take part in any sport or activities that they are interested in. This essay will point out these two points and voice my personal opinion.
On the one hand, advocates of a ban on extreme sports would argue that much as participants in such activities are equipped with essential sports gear, they still could have to face a high chance of serious injuries or death. A mountain climber, for example, is highly in danger of a fatal fall even with the protection of climbing equipment. Additionally, it seems that not only players could suffer from appalling injuries but also some of these sports might inflict severe damages on spectators. Take car racing as an illustration, if a formula 1 race car crashes, its debris from the crash can fly into the crowd. This would cause serious injuries to both the racer and spectators.
On the other hand, I support the views of those advocate for extreme sports due to the fact that people should be free to engage in any sport any sport that they choose. For instance, it would be wrong to stop climbing enthusiasts from challenging themselves and enjoying a sense of fulfillment of standing on top of a mountain peak. Look beyond this, if dangerous sports were previously prohibited, the world would not have to witness the amazing feats of risk-takers. Furthermore, those who participate in these activities regularly have to undertake rigorous training to make sure they are in peak physical and mental condition in order to take up these hazardous sports. As a result of this, the concern of the risk element becomes somewhat reduced.
To sum up, although dangerous sports could relate to severe injuries, I completely agree that people should have freedom to take part in any sport they want because of all aforementioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...point out these two points and voice my personal opinion. On the one hand, advocates of a ban...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'any sport'.
Suggestion: any sport
...that people should be free to engage in any sport any sport that they choose. For instance, it woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65746345777 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5828722296 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.230769231 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275286752225 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846960356753 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106576683359 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184349004598 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939568616031 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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