Some employees want to be able to contact their staff all the times, even on holidays.Does this development have advantages than disadvantages?

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Some employees want to be able to contact their staff all the times, even on holidays.
Does this development have advantages than disadvantages?

Work Pressure on employees is continuously Increasing. These days it has become common practice in many organisation to approach there workers or employees even on non- working day. Although, people have different thoughts about this working culture, but I completely believe that this practice has more drawbacks than benefits.

The predominant reason for me to assert that contacting employees on holiday is not a positive approach is effect on work life balance. All the people around the world are working hard in order to maintain good life style and to fulfill the basic requirement of their family members. If they are not allowed to spend their spare time with their family and friends they will remain disturbed, because the main aim of doing all the hard work will be missing. Ultimately, it will have adverse effect on the employee's productivity. In addition, they will try to find another job and company will loss there skilled and trained worker. Hence, the over all profit of the organisation will decline.

Another reason is loss of goodwill among public. If proper corporate culture is not maintained, professional and skilled labour will not be interested in joining the company, and there will be shortage of qualified people. Training and recruitment expenses of the firm will increase. Apart for this because of this negative image people will start to withdraw their money and share price will decline in long run. Expansion is far survival of the organisation in the present product line will be difficult. May be in short run profits will increase, but by forcing the staff to involve in office works during holidays future will be in dark.

In conclusion, disturbing the staff on holidays is a ill practice as it will cost the company to loss its talented and capable work force. Maintaining proper corporate work culture is extremely essential for the success of the organisation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organisation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many organisations'.
Suggestion: many organisations
...e days it has become common practice in many organisation to approach there workers or employees ...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tely, it will have adverse effect on the employees productivity. In addition, the...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...ly, it will have adverse effect on the employees productivity. In addition, they will tr...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ent product line will be difficult. May be in short run profits will increase, but...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...on, disturbing the staff on holidays is a ill practice as it will cost the compan...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al for the success of the organisation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10191082803 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69626192915 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557324840764 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8754982831 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2352941176 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161748027719 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534727266238 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380917899631 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948447716236 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446081153145 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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