Question: Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter
. Describe the problem
. say how long it has been a problem.
. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take
Dear Mr lookman,
I am writing to explain to you about the excessive disturbance from your music played in your room every night. Furthermore, the fumes from your generator get into the living room when the loafers are not promptly closed in the evening.
This has been on going since last week , which make sleeping difficult after a hectic day at work. My baby also cries a lot once the noise comes up and it takes a lot of consoling before she goes back to sleep
I will suggest window proof is gotten so you can enjoy the music while we have a restful night in our apartment. For the generator, a generator house should be built at the backyard and it been moved from your balcony to the back of the flat to prevent unhealthy emissions inhalation, which is harmful to the health of the family.
Thank you and hoping these challenges are resolved soonest immediately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr lookman, I am writing to explain to you about the...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...closed in the evening. This has been on going since last week , which make sleeping d...
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Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... This has been on going since last week , which make sleeping difficult after a h...
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Line 6, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'emissions'' or 'emission's'?
Suggestion: emissions'; emission's
...e back of the flat to prevent unhealthy emissions inhalation, which is harmful to the hea...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hank you and hoping these challenges are resolved soonest immediately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64331210191 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43065168574 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713375796178 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8954997292 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137556859216 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631129251552 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504417185602 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717041787713 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505791905406 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.