Parents are the best teachers. Do yo agree or disagree.
divided both in favour and against this argument. Both have a very strong influence on a child's learning. In my opinion, parents overtake the teachers in terms of teaching their children.
To start with, influence of parents can never ever be underestimated. Firstly, parents are constant companions, guides and witness to all the joys and sorrows of children in their childhood. Secondly, emotional bonding of children with their parents is extremely high, which also strengthens the influence of parents. For instance- a survey was conducted by WHO in India which proved that children follow the instructions given by the parents more as compared to the teachers.
Thirdly, the things that children learn from parents are far more important than what they learn from their teachers. They learn to survive, talk and distinguish well from bad, values of life , morality and other things from their parents.
In summary, the things we learn from our teachers are important for our lives and with those valuable lessons and knowledge we prepare for the future but the things we learn from our parents shapes who we are, who we become and their contribution is much more important compared to the contribution of the traditional academic teachers and that’s why in my opinion parents are best teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in summary, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19339622642 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71259951432 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542452830189 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.9653094556 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133102070531 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536842761106 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381559951055 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776700973539 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320762784353 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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