A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase which he she has not returned yet Write a letter to him her reminding to bring it back and say What suitcase and when dud he she borrow it Why do you need it back What should he she do about it

Essay topics:

A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?

Dear Ram

Hope you are in pink of your health. This letter is written to remind you about my suitcase that was borrowed last month for holidays.

I assumed that You would have enjoyed a great weekend at Jaipur and my luggage bag would surely helped to mange things during travelling. I remembered that because of its gorgeous look i was flattered when i saw it first time. It is made of high strength fibre plastic which is light in weight and got attention of other people. The most amazing thing that apprised me about it, is its vivid Red colour that helped me many time for identification during arrivals at airports. The steel handles are also unique that distinguishes it from other ordinary suitcases.

I remember that i have received a phone call from your mother stating your plan and your youngest brother has picked the same from my home. Since, i am observing a marriage on next sunday, I request you to return it directly to my home on immediate basis before friday, so as I could plan my journey in advance.

At last, pay my regards to your parents and lots of love to little devil.

Yours truly

John smith

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ram Hope you are in pink of your health. Thi...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... Jaipur and my luggage bag would surely helped to mange things during travelling. I re...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...bered that because of its gorgeous look i was flattered when i saw it first time....
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... its gorgeous look i was flattered when i saw it first time. It is made of high s...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: light
...of high strength fibre plastic which is light in weight and got attention of other people. The ...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... is its vivid Red colour that helped me many time for identification during arrivals at a...
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Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ishes it from other ordinary suitcases. I remember that i have received a phone ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...as picked the same from my home. Since, i am observing a marriage on next sunday,...
^
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rents and lots of love to little devil. Yours truly John smith
^^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f love to little devil. Yours truly John smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, mind you

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6157635468 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39945474971 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669950738916 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.765183808 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1818181818 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084083956529 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321413976117 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401525936854 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580460071779 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572159074261 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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