Agree or disagree :- It is more important to work at job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low, than it is to have a high paying job that you do not enjoy

Grammar and spelling errors:
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our life mainly divide in 3 phases. First o...
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...on period, which last upto 20-25 years. last is retirement phase which mostly after ...
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...y making also called as working period. we do jobs in this period and make money w...
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Suggestion: If
...ey which helps for our family survival. if I have two option like high paid but un...
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Line 1, column 442, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to second'
Suggestion: to second
...enjoyable but with low salary; I choose second one. if you enjoy your working it...
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Suggestion:
...with low salary; I choose second one. if you enjoy your working its has great ...
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... low salary; I choose second one. if you enjoy your working its has great be...
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Suggestion: If
...fits on health, professions and social. if you not liking your job, you easily str...
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...fits on health, professions and social. if you not liking your job, you easily str...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ure and sugar kind of illness; he never make self or family happy. In opposite, a pe...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'forced'.
Suggestion: forced
...self and family happy. A person has not force himself for work therefore he easily co...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'concentrates'.
Suggestion: concentrates
...ce himself for work therefore he easily concentrate more on work and complete their tasks b...
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Suggestion: He
...eir tasks before time in enjoyable job. he spend rest of the time on family and fr...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
... tasks before time in enjoyable job. he spend rest of the time on family and friends,...
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Suggestion:
...make you earn more money and respect. if you like your job, you do more in you...
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Suggestion: If
... you earn more money and respect. if you like your job, you do more in your ...
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Suggestion: If
...d like invent new methods, do research. if you get demanding, time consuming, stre...
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Suggestion: Money
...b you can buy luxury but not happiness. money makes you wealthy but not healthy. ...
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Suggestion:
...ey makes you wealthy but not healthy. From help of money we can buy a food but...
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Suggestion: helps
...e new relations but not maintain it, it help to pay a hospital bills but not buy a l...
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...ay a hospital bills but not buy a life. that's why money is not the only important t...
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Suggestion: We
...ore quality life than a wealthy person. we needs our basic needs like meal for eat...
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... quality life than a wealthy person. we needs our basic needs like meal for eating, home ...
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
... quality life than a wealthy person. we needs our basic needs like meal for eating, h...
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Suggestion: If
..., home for living, clothes for wearing. if we get this from an enjoyable job, I pr...
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Suggestion: Therefore
... this job than a stressful unhappy job. therefore, I agree with the statement of an essay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39569767846 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6789070585 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4090909091 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7727272727 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370678808761 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105186103025 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956171633342 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225668282554 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704639374863 0.0645574589148 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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