The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

The table illustrates how long every British person traveled from 1985 to 2000 by different travel modes: Walking, Bicycle, Car, Local bus, Long distance bus, Train, Taxi, and Other. Overall, the average miles in all modes experienced an increasing trend, from 4,740 miles in 1985 to 6,475 miles in 2000.

Over the period of these fifteen years, the average distance traveled by Car, Other, Train, Long distance bus, and Taxi showed upward trends. In 1985, car, with 3199 miles, travelled far longer distance than any other transport mode. Then its average miles rose to 4806 miles in 2000, which also remain the longest distance. The rising trend also can be seen in Other(450 miles—585 miles), Train (289 miles—366 miles), Long distance bus(54 miles—124miles), and Taxi(13 miles—42 miles).

However, the distance in the rest travel modes had a decrease. The miles that Local bus traveled dropped to 274 miles in 2000 from 429 miles in 1985, which was the most dramatic decline.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13664596273 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39448848265 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633540372671 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0599177009 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148796567918 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858004614034 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510669622462 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133526281772 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047353097198 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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