Some people think that the amount of money spent on libraries is a waste as new technologies are developing and replacing library functions. Do you agree or disagree.
Library is known to be a prime source of the knowledge and information. But the modern technology has made this source time convenient and easily accessible. At present, the huge investment has made the new technology more advanced and functional. Nevertheless, a contribution to the library can expand a person’s knowledge, wisdom and imagination.
The library is regarded as a collection and preservation of the all types of books, magazines, journals and references which comes from the valid and reliable sources. Besides, it has a calm quite atmosphere which comforts the learners. Furthermore, it is a great place for the seekers where they can search and discuss their thoughts and imagination to others. In addition, a librarian is always available whose duty is to help others by providing useful information and books for sometimes.
The new technology has occupied the activities of the library and allowed a person to receive library facilities in their home. For example, different international electronic books, publications and journals are now openly accessible in the web pages. Hence, anyone can simply download countless of books in their home without paying any visit to library. Even though it has numerous advantages, one may not enjoy the service unless he has computer and internet with himself. Sometimes it contains fake and invalid sources which deliver false information to the learners.
There is no doubt that advance technology has opened up the entrance of the latest news and researches across the world. But only the library has the hidden power to enlarge a person’s intelligence, mind and fantasy. For this reasons, the contribution to the library may encourage and inspire the people learn and seek more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, for example, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34532374101 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01662834659 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0152946057 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157489473675 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493747325058 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586553156438 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096847546033 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410811757408 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.