nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops. why do you think this happens? is this a positive or negative try and give your opinion and example from your own experience
Supermarket are the main attraction of citizens, who can buy any thing on one place. Whereas, this trend decrease the sell of local shop. This essay I will mansion that which reason are responsible for increasing the demand of big mall and explain some benefits and advantages of changing shopping place.
There are several cause which make main attraction of supermarket. First of all, supermarket offer heavy discount and better quality of item in cheaper price, while local market give fix price of things in every shop which cannot changeable. Secondly, local shop always try to cheat to their client giving duplicate item rather than original brand. In India many shopkeeper sell duplicate I phone on original price. Therefore, customer feel untrust on small shop for buying item. As a consumer ' s point of view supermarket are best for shoppers who can buy every thing in same place as a result it save their time. However, according to buyer's view, shops are the major source of revenue of poor person, so if people go towards shopping mall than shoppers would have need of finding new job after closing it. For example my father have cloth shop in cities where demand of clothes are very low after introduction of new shopping mall near by shop. Therefore this trend is harmful for buyer than consumer.
In the conclusion, if shopper offer better quality of products in efficient price. Eventually, people 's behaviour may change after taking this step.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94308943089 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46823966009 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642276422764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9478651359 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181254255568 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655373296894 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493873338077 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116839566627 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378124451868 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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