You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Sonya. Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction. As We got to know that your company is going to increase the insurance amount for car.
I have been managing my car insurance with your company for the last 8 years and my insurance policy number is 8101023457-115-2. As I am already paying a higher amount which every month than that of some of my colleagues and relatives. Moreover, you can check my existing record in last 7 year I didn't made any accident. I get services my car always every 40000 kilometers. For Illustrate I have attached the service's slip online with my Id. The 20% increase in monthly insurance payment is not acceptable for me.
I would really appreciate if you could write me back with an explanation of why such an increase is needed when others have not done so. I request you to reconsider the decision, otherwise, I am afraid I will have to move my car insurance policy to another company.I am looking forward to receiving your prompt response as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Soniya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... I am Sonya. Hope you are doing well. Im writing this letter to express my dissa...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of my colleagues and relatives. Moreover , you can check my existing record , in l...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eover , you can check my existing record , in last 7 year I didnt made any acciden...
^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...k my existing record , in last 7 year I didnt made any accident. I get services my ca...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...tached the services slip online with my Id. The 20% increase in monthly insurance ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...insurance policy to another company. I am looking forward to receiving your pr...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71502590674 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84323712872 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642487046632 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9645538796 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135051620371 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050636712001 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530676938476 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837998638038 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542931992073 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.