Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
transportation playing a prominent role in the contemporary world, because it makes things easier. so there has been no shortage of debate about how the transportation impact on society. However, the question is does it really providing a superior place to the world. Some people believed it is not true; because it polluting the environment. On the other hand, I personally fell modern transportation standup the world in a better place reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, modern transportation enables international trading, while the exchange of goods. if a country doesn't have a proper transportation system; it impacts on the country economy. My friend, Alex pharmaceutical business is the best example to illustrate this. He started a company approximately twenty years back; when there was no proper transportation. As a result, he has forbidden his business to his own country. However, recently he started to export his company medications to the neighboring country Canada via road route. what more, now his company is in the top position in both quality and financially. I think this was happened because of the efficient transportation system.
In addition to that, modern transportation saves a lot of time and money, which are very precious in the present days. Although, excessive use of vehicles generate environmental pollution; as a whole, it saves a lot of time. In the modern days, people couldn't image a day without traveling. for an instant, if I travel to my home country, India hardly it will take ten to thirteen hours through the flight and it saves a lot of time. Moreover, i can't make a trip to India fro Americ without flight. My friend is the best example of this. when we were studying master degree at the University of Findlay one day suddenly he got a call from his parents and he he need to goto home and he made it with in a couple.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, while, as for, i think, in addition, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03005043014 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585139318885 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.432467291 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.05 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159305174413 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043963961415 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061226203398 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113250602392 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734380491537 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.