Some people feel crime rates are best lowered by increasing prison sentences. Discuss this topic. What are some alternatives to raising prison sentences?
The decrement of crime rates is an international issue with which almost all governments around the world are grappling. While many suggest it can be countered by increasing of prison sentences, I strongly disagree with the point that the more felons will be sentenced to imprisonment, the lower crime rates will be. In this essay, the insolvency of this statement will be shown as well, as some alternatives of reducing a number of crimes will be considered.
With regards to increasement of prison sentences, this step is not being able to lower a number of felonies. Moreover, many experts of criminology express a claim, based on a particular number of researches, that the decrement of the scope of crimes is contributed by not the severity of punishment, but its inevitability. For example, the percentage of adjudicated convictions in Russian courts reaches the number of 99, most of all are prison sentences, but however crime rates in Russia still remain high. Thus, it becomes quite evident that increased prison sentences cannot lower crime rates.
However, it is possible to nullify this issue by considering other methods of decreasing crimes, such as providing affordable education to people with the addiction to criminal behaviour. It is no secret that many people tend to make crimes because of their poor monetary status and lack of opportunities to improve it. While the amount of economical crimes from the entire number of crimes are significant, this rate can be easily decreased by affordable education which can remove individual from the risk group and provide him an opportunity to survive without making crimes. Thus, education for poor people is a real alternative to prison sentences in order to decrease rate of crimes.
To sum up, I believe that increasing a number of prison sentences is a wrong way to resolve a problem of high rate of crimes. I recommend governments all over the world to turn their sight on alternatives, such as providing education for people with high risk of criminal behaviour, to deal with this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...f 99, most of all are prison sentences, but however crime rates in Russia still remain high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08849557522 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93149152979 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507374631268 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5982944352 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.692307692 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315087168208 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124531045916 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732805558772 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193814386342 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050346594531 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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