Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The author claims that scandals help us to focus our attention on problems in ways no speaker ever could. I generally disagree with this contention for the following reasons.
To begin, when a person gets trapped in any scandal, their primary focus lies on how to vindicate themselves from the scandal. To illustrate this let us take an example of a political scandal. In any political scandal, like senator getting involved in an extramarital affair during his or her term in the Senate, once the scandal comes out in public, then the main aim becomes how to come out of that scandal rather than focusing on the problem. While finding ways to come out of the problem, many a time, these people get involved in more wrongdoings or unscrupulous acts or even criminal activities. Thus, both from personal experience and common sense we can understand that scandals can never help us to focus our attention on problems.
Furthermore, scandals give rise to public outrage and social humiliation. Now, imagine if a person who is innocent but has been framed in a scandal then what will be his or her mental situation. That person will be demoralized which can even lead him or her into depression and anxiety. Public appearance becomes an issue.
On the other hand, media will sensationalize the news on different public platforms. Due to this, that person feels disgraced and takes up mean of self-destruction or even have a tendency to commit suicide. Therefore, it reveals that scandal can never help us to focus on our problems.
Finally, some might argue that if a person gets involved in any scandal then due to public shame they will learn their lesson. This assertion can be true sometimes but in most of the cases, it proves otherwise as people find means to come out of the problem rather than focusing on the same.
In conclusion, a scandal is never useful in anyone's life but it can prove to be a game plan for people in opposition, who can use the same to manipulate the situation and make it work in their favor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , scandals
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Public
... him or her into depression and anxiety.Public appearance becomes an issue. On the ot...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
... the news in different public platforms.Due to this,that person feels disgraced and...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... even have a tendency to commit suicide.Therefore, it reveals that scandal can never help...
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Message: Did you mean 'proves'?
Suggestion: proves
...e sometimes but in most of the cases it prove otherwise as people find means to come ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8386167147 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8538961791 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556195965418 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3294407457 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.928571429 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18912121028 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736827782701 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792211165591 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112840518753 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910706862152 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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