these days with advances in technology more and more people are working from home. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion
It is true that as there is advancement in technology, most of them prefer to perform work tasks from home. There are positive and negative impact while working from residence.
As there is increase in technology, people could handle their job profile by using laptop and good internet connectivity. There are chances where employees has the ability to give more productivity while working from home instead of workplace as there will be less disturbance. Another factor which has advantages is some of them can spend time with their family as before the advanced technology, people used to spend huge amount of time in office. Lastly, people could save lot of time in travelling from office to home and vice versa.
On the flip side, all job could not be performed from home, some has to be completed at workplace. For example, workers working in factories and industries cannot work from their residence. Some work requires good internet connection and if it gets fluctuate or due to bad connection, it could hamper the virtual meeting within the team or clients. Another factor which has detrimental effect while working from home is staff has to work for longer duration if employer instructs to them. There is possibility of cyber attacks if working from home and connected on internet with untrusted sources which could leak the secret information of organization.
To sum up, I believe advantages outweigh disadvantages and organization should assign work to the people which could be performed from home instead of asking their employees to work from office.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, so, while, as to, for example, in fact, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69726228697 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0182704616 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269658936982 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108255507308 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531681371326 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182665686906 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224219272445 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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