Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.
Do you agree or disagree with the above notion?
People earn their money by going through many hardships therefore they are unhappy to pay a part of their income to Government. A group of people think that they have the right to keep all of their earnings without having any obligation of paying any tax. I completely disagree to this statement as duties and taxes are useful for the citizens of any country and below essay will discuss it in detail.
To start with, any government requires fund to develop the country and discharge multiple responsibilities. The government bi-furcates taxes into various matters. Majority of the part is allocated to defense and development of infrastructure facilities. Firstly, they are used for building bridges for better connectivity, expanding roads by replacing damaged public properties and funding military services which is crucial for political stability of the nation. Secondly, significant portion is spent towards providing basic necessities of people who are below poverty line along with facilitating them with primary education and decent medical services.
Furthermore, citizens should be obliged to pay taxes as sooner or later they are the real beneficiaries. The funds collected by tax authorities are utilized for providing pension in the age of retirement also with concessional medical facilities. Therefore, people should prompt comply in paying their taxes and duties to government.
To sum, I do not agree if we should keep all our income and not pay any taxes to the government, as taxes are beneficial for the development of the people and the nation themselves along with maintaining economic stability of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...cant portion is spent towards providing basic necessities of people who are below poverty line al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37984496124 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99912853156 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9053626003 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332509811643 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115612173008 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954634716562 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213674046109 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770592782052 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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