You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the fight, but didn’t like services at airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say,
1) Give you flight details
2) Why were you disappointed?
3) Suggest some improvements to airport services.
Dear Mr. Hashmi,
I am writing in regard to my recent trip to Los Angeles which I took to attend conference on Project Management. My flight experience was good I did not felt discomfort, although, I faced difficulties on airport.
I flew from Dubai in Qatar Airways flight # 237XA on Saturday night and reached Los Angeles international airport on Sunday evening. Apart from travel sickness, my travel was pleasant.
On reaching airport, I faced two problems, first one of which was security check. I had to wait more than two hour just for clearance. Secondly, after checking I was unable to find my luggage and to my astonishment I found no responsible person to ask to.
I purpose to upgrade your staff by hiring qualified persons and establish separate department for luggage so that these issues could be fixed.
I hope to see these changes in my next trip.
Kind Regards,
Jaun Elia
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Comments
1st try after long time so i
1st try after long time so i guess thats ok. ill improve soon
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...rity check. I had to wait more than two hour just for clearance. Secondly, after che...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9477124183 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76819179529 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712418300654 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8388295621 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0655313349024 0.216113520407 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251866053217 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268068462096 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0362655373005 0.12726935374 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295098020958 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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