The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.
The table depicts the number of tourists visiting Ashdown Museum, and the pie charts explain visitor satisfaction statistics before and after the museum renovation work.
The footfall of people increased from 74,000 to 92,000 after the refurbishment of museum. The percentage of very satisfied and satisfied guests increased, conversely the proportion of people who were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied decreased largely. The percentage of people who chose not to respond remained constant.
Along with the toll of people increasing, the percentage of very satisfied customers plummeted from 15 percent to 35 percent after renewing the museum. The portion of guests who were satisfied from earlier visit increased from 30 percent to 40 percent. In contrast, the percentage of visitors who were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied earlier decreased from 40 percent to 15 percent and 10 percent to 5 percent respectively. There were still 5 percent of the visitors who denied commenting both before and after refurbishment.
In conclusion, it can be observed, that after the renovation, more people showed up and were, in general, more satisfied with their visit than earlier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, still, in conclusion, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5635359116 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00571781961 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497237569061 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4228424335 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.888888889 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196035900215 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946685340483 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749554292636 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146481299652 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074656916929 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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