The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s culture identity. Some people believe the government should make sure that new buildings are built in a traditional style. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Most nation around the world have at least some old buildings such as temples , churches and traditional houses in their cities , which have historical significance . In my opinion , it is important to maintain these , but it dose not mean progress should be stop .
In my book , modernization should not be discouraged. I believe that old buildings can be protected in tandem with progress. For example , we see many old historic buildings being renovated by maintaining their original character , and being used for modern purposes.
Preserving old buildings is important for several reasons. Firstly, these structures provide the history of our countries , learning us how people many centuries ago lived . Secondly , many of these buildings provide important income to a country as many tourists visit them in large number.
To conclude , I believe that it is very important to protect and preserve old buildings as we can learn about our history as can others from other countries. Such knowledge can also help us to understand how to modernize our countries in the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20231213873 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88697162381 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8386046254 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126806886709 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565406301613 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373830836387 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776042018855 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293362824339 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.