Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your reasons and examples.
With the rise of online shopping, these days people shop online more rather than go to the actual stores. In my opinion, this is a great development in terms of saving time and money.
First of all, it must be said that shopping sites bring actual stores to our screens, so we do not even have to get out our warm beds, just a click and the purchase is done. Also, because of the high circulation of shopping from all around the world or country, items that people purchased have to be delivered in a short time by the company. For example, a company that provides online shopping, has recently announced that all the orders from online stores will be given to the cargo company in an hour and if the area, which owner located, close to the storage, that they keep the goods, the order will be shipped before the evening.
When it comes to the prices, online shopping also provides cheaper goods than in-store shopping because everything that they sell is kept in the storages so that's why they don't have to pay extra money and taxes for the actual store. For instance, last month my phone was broken down, so I needed to get a new one. However, prices in the actual stores were too much and unacceptable. Thus, I decided to buy it from online store and realized that phones on the Internet stores was around two hundred dollars cheaper than the in-stores.
When all things are considered, every passing day, online shopping become more popular around people and in my opinion it affects them in a beneficial way such as faster delivery and cheaper prices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63214285714 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2530138545 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0816666468 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.7 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231025641863 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898671077518 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662435893777 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150086846286 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431959062888 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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