A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Good start in education is very important for all students for further learning. Oftentimes, students enthusiasm for learning is muted by dullness of subjects studied. While majority of subjects should be identical for all students from K-12, in order to kindle the eagerness for learning, some portion of elective classes should be available as well.
To begin with, subjects such as math and language are irreplaceable in curriculum, since without them people cannot function properly in society. Without sufficient knowledge of language, the communication, as well as knowledge of other fields ...
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