Your friend has asked you about the course details you recently did in a training centre. Explain about the course details, why should your friend take this course and how has the course benefitted you.
Dear Sally,
Hi how are you doing there? I am really loving my training here in the English centre here in Cambridge.
I am writing to you to explain this module. To start with, this kind of training will give you an edge into communicating to other people. Specifically to a English speaking nation another, is that you can also take IELTS in order for you to become a university professor if wish to.
You should take this course since that it will give an in depth understanding to the English language. As well as give you a lot of confidence when communicating in your house or in you work place. It is also cheap when you enroll right now that includes a lot of perks like exercise materials, 1 on 1 coaching and Lesson materials.
If you want me to accompany you to enroll just give me a call or email me at gai@mail.com. There is no enrollment period since that it is a module base type of a training.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Bill
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- More and more people are choosing ready to eat food rather cooking themselves Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages 71
- A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? 56
- Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Thank them for the holiday and the photos, explain why did not write earlier and invite them to come and stay with you 73
- Money should be spent on creating new public buildings, such as museums and town halls, rather than renovating existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sally, Hi how are you doing there? I am really ...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ally, Hi how are you doing there? I am really loving my training here in the English centre ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cating to other people. Specifically to a English speaking nation another, is tha...
^
Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'type of'.
Suggestion: type of
...t period since that it is a module base type of a training. I look forward to hearing ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, kind of, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45604395604 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64822055213 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4485939372 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293837388702 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103227707405 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743981178792 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145186789757 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689444408429 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.