In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly believed by some masses that the use of plastic polyethene ought to be prohibited as it is regarded the pollutant which pollute water and soil in many nations. I am in consummate accord that polythene bags should be strictly banned as it is non biodegradable substance.
To begin with, the use of plastic polythene is increasing at alarming rate in multiple countries as it is cheaper. And, after using it, people throw it as debris which further do not decompose by the biological action of microorganisms. In this way, the plastic particles would blend with soil and pollute the land. Moreover, some hazardous particles of plastic would enter in human body and animal body through food that is grown in soil and causes several health related problems such as cancer etcetera. also, if the soil would be enriched with the polluting particles of plastic than the crops would not get enough nutrients from soil for its proper growth and development.
Additionally, the water is also going to be polluted when some persons throw waste plastic pieces in ponds and rivers. Generally speaking, the plastic would not dissolve in water and hinder the growth of marine animals and plants. Therefore, if the animals like fish inhale oxygen from water than the plastic segments would go to their body and fishes will loss their life. To illustrate, the national flower 'lotus' in my home country is going to be extinct due to the presence to plastic wastage.
In conclusion, my opinion is that the use of plastic bags should be strictly banned which have negative consequences on human and animals species.
- People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. 61
- Scientists agree that many people are eating too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problems can be solved by educating people to eat less junk food. Other people believe that education will not work.Discuss both o 73
- Most countries do not recycle their waste like paper glass and aluminum cans Why does this happen and what steps can be taken to encourage recycling 71
- although more and more people are reading news on the internet, most people still prefer reading the news in a newspaper. What are your views? 67
- Some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports. Why is this? What can be done to tackle the problem? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95955882353 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6183053328 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547794117647 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9366512229 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.416666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212333446602 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842681553541 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336033106822 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136714909837 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301447667619 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.