Most of the people make mistake by associating money with happiness .What are the various reasons and solutions for it.
Undoubtedly, money has taken into one of the most principle humans requirement and it is an irrefutable fact which it can makes people wealth, however it should be mentioned that there is not virtually direct relationship between money and happiness in life. In this essay I would like to identify sources of this issue as well as some viable solutions as follows.
While ordinary individuals pursue the celebrities and rich men lives assume that there is nobody as fortune as them, thus, they begin to envy the possessions belongs to this comfortable level of the community. It is incredibly an enjoyable feeling while you can afford whatever is essential in your life span. Moreover, you have the senses of reliability as well as safety without any concerns because the financial matters function as a supporter in every phases of the life. The minority section parts of the society which is known as spoiled children is particularly a good example of this trend that spend countless amount of money regardless of the prices.
On the other hand, I would argue my opinion which it is highly unlikely to be found any way in order to overcome the ahead problems in short terms. Chief among the causes of this complexity is unbalanced distribution of money and assets among the various layers of society in whole worldwide, hence, that is the reason why all countries are struggling with this difficulties. AS long as the monetary sources do not be divided equally we witness this challenge will got more acute. Nonetheless, taking the heavy tax from people namely manufacturers and traders perhaps would be considered as a solution in far future.
AS a result, I state my position that having a vast amount of money really does not mean to be successful and lively and with no doubt you can find rich families do not live happily and are involved with problematic difficulties in private and vocational life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “AS” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: get
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, really, so, thus, well, while, as for, in short, no doubt, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92901234568 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74441382999 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608024691358 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3265259589 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.181818182 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148010103448 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457325797962 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553323185033 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884118296717 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545799638487 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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