"Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives.
What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?
There is no doubt that young people are becoming victim of the hectic routines of life such as social, educational and economic. In this essay, I will contend the key reasons behind this new trend and try to bring some solutions for this dark cycle.
“Children are the next generation, so they need to be advanced and formidable contender for the globe”, this has become a motto of every family. Parents insist their child to get good grades, show extraordinary skills and grasp the world knowledge and skills. For example, in India, last year a five year old child became popular on televisio...
- Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion about this trend 47
- Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card However some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back In your opinion do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages 83
- What are the benefits of living in big cities as opposed to rural areas What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved 87
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 65
- WT2: some sports are dangerous. Why people still take place in these sports? What can be done to reduce the dangers? 80
such skills matters
such skills matter
Sentence: Although, academically intelligence is equally necessary, to accomplish this, the little ones could be indulged into a schedule in their favour of all fundamental needs including their interest rather to pressurize them to go on one way only.
Description: The fragment , academically intelligence is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace academically with adjective
although intelligent children are the pillar of the society, but for this...
Description: Don't put although and But in one sentence.
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 340 350
No. of Characters: 1670 1500
No. of Different Words: 208 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.294 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.912 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.534 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.895 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.958 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.262 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.447 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5