Do you agree or disagree with the following statment? In the twenty years there will be fewer cars in the use than there are today. Use spesifik reason and example to support your answer.
us" style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">In recent decades, we have witnessed a rapid growth of the number of domestic cars with the help of the development of modern technologies. The arguments collides in the topic that whether cars in use will decline in twenty years. From my perspective, we will witness a drop in cars in use.
us" style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">First of all, governments are building and planning new underground and bus lines every year. Everyone, as an ordinary citizen, can see the development of the cities' means of transports. that is to say, it has become much more convenient and commodious or us to get around. I am saying without any exaggeration that we can go any where we want in the city just by the public transports. Besides, it is also much cheaper by using transports than driving cars. If we want to drive, we have to pay at least the gasoline and the fee of parking lots. Since only the fee of parking lots equals to the expense of taking transports, it will cost a lot by driving. To summarize, the decrease of chances that people will use cars lead to the decline of cars in use.
us" style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">In addition, with the appeal of environmental protection, citizens will become unwilling to use cars for the purpose of protecting environments. The exhaust released by cars every year is a major source of greenhouse gas. it is known to all that greenhouse gas has huge and negative effects on the earth, especially its temperature. Moreover, there are many substitutes of cars like public means of transports that I mentioned before and walking which is a way of exercise. there is also evidence show that the amount of people who buy cars is declining these years. So, it can be foreseen that the number of cars on the road will not increase in a few years and then it will decline.
us" style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">In a nutshell, the decrease of chances that people will use cars and the number of g who buy cars serve to the decline of cars in use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, then, at least, in addition, first of all, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16761363636 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.78002604115 2.80592935109 170% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508522727273 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0225320058 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.055555556 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162895874922 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695650296462 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723502830881 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128145272495 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169282482506 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.