the diagram below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant.
The given map depicts the present ground floor plan of a museum and future changes.
It can be vividly seen that according to current plan the toilets, open atrium and walkway area along with lifts from left and right are designed in the middle of the place. The entrance of the current museum is in the east side, on the right side of the entrance there are four rooms of design, craft room, store room,and gemstones. Left portion is situated for mind and body parts, evolution, and dynosures. In the back of middle area there are some marine life. Some changed could be seen in the future ground floor of museum, the Marine life will replace with the entrance.
Turning to rest of description, the store room will shift in place of marine and in the another corner of this place a modern art room will also design. The entrance part will be near the walkway area. The left lift will be attached with right side lift.
- some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food others however think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility discuss both views and give your own opinion 58
- the table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who roads bicycle in 2011. 61
- Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 78
- some people say that government should spend money on faster public transport others think that money should be spend on different aspects such as cost reduction and environment conservation discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- the given graph show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... rooms of design, craft room, store room,and gemstones. Left portion is situated for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53892215569 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04988173596 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550898203593 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7723670663 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2222222222 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898429715487 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419784205831 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574375931932 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844889066847 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655397012605 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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