Which facilities are needed more in your area
Car park
Sports centre
In a general view, it cannot be denied that both a car park and a sports center are of significance to our area. They would greatly compile the health of the people and provide them with parking places whenever they go to the centers. The thing is which one is more in need. First of all, in the neighborhood, there are always a gym or a fitness center available because those are the places where the youngster and adolescent often go to. The new facilities would not only improve the health of young people, but they would also do the same to the children as well as the elderly people, keeping them fit and in good shape.
Turning to the other side of the point, a car pack is also necessary for the town due to the increasing amount of vehicles in recent years. It would be a problem finding a spot to park cars nearby. Moreover, the local people find it difficult to park their car on the weekends when all the nearby parking lots are unavailable.
To sum up, both facilities play their own important role in improving the residents' life. However, we should consider the health of the local people to be the top priority. In addition, the advantages of the sports center seem to outweigh one of the car parks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
...eir own important role in improving the residents life. However, we should consider the h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43303571429 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40571157506 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8657831845 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0651494061239 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037106126654 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903113540058 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0389263943673 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342365147526 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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