Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning."
Though the above statement is true in some instances that success comes from taking risk but the above statement is invalid in most of the cases.
For achieving success in life one must apply persistence effort and have high determination along with necessary tool which is planning. Most of successful people
had to pass through hurdles in order to achieve their potential and become what they are. Also amount of hard work is not the only factor determining success sometimes
taking risk and going beyond the routine helps scaling new heights. As a result success can be achieved by a person who is ia risk taker as well as a determined and
relentless worker.
There is a list of people who were on the verge of bankruptcy and gave almost everything to achieve success. Elon Musk is a apotheosis of the list
he invested all his money in his rocket program (SpaceX) and was successful in his last attempt to send the rocket to mars which was the first of a kind
rocket with component reusability. Had he not taken the risk and ended his venture after few unsuccessful attempt we wouldn't seen the major step of
human race and till he continues to take risk by investing in various other project which seems unachievable at first.
Although taking risk not necessarily means achieving success there is a equal chance of failure. So taking risk certain important parameter shall be kept in mind
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...eir potential and become what they are. Also amount of hard work is not the only fac...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nly factor determining success sometimes taking risk and going beyond the routine...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to scale' or 'scale'.
Suggestion: to scale; scale
...risk and going beyond the routine helps scaling new heights. As a result success can be...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a risk taker as well as a determined and relentless worker. There is a list of...
^^^
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ything to achieve success. Elon Musk is a apotheosis of the list he invested all...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...nture after few unsuccessful attempt we wouldnt seen the major step of human race and ...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t which seems unachievable at first. Although taking risk not necessarily means achie...
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Line 12, column 71, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sarily means achieving success there is a equal chance of failure. So taking risk...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81069958848 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55461769501 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621399176955 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5968378459 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.9 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205484262599 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831445746118 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537568685657 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081804640722 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605539615335 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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