Nowadays, many people are trying to make themselves look younger than they really are.What are the reasons for this, it is a positive or negative development?
It is an irrefutable fact that age plays an important role in every individuals sphere, As we grow older many of us will try to look younger because of plethora of reasons. This essay will explain some of them and draw an opinion about the development of this human behavior.
Although we are in graying society, majority of people try their best to look young and energetic. The society usually recognizes and appreciates younger looking personalities. Considering several aspects of current market job roles, many of the employers will give more opportunity to young people and project them as a front facing representatives, which will portray their glamour and talent. This is one of the prominent reasons that urge an individual to look younger in the society.
Another point worth noting is, this nature of looking younger not only leads to a healthy lifestyle but also will enhance the life span. When it comes to keep up a good lifestyle, people need to do exercise and yoga which will make them look younger as well as fit. This can be seen in increasing number amongst the age group of 40 and above joining yoga studios and gyms to look physically and mentally fit. In brief, looking young is one of the reasons to maintain a healthy lifestyle.
All things consider, in today’s world age plays a major role in almost all sectors, as looking physically and mentally young is imperative for the overall development of an individual and society. As far as I am concerned looking young is always a positive development.
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...velopment of an individual and society. As far as I am concerned looking young is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, in brief, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87022900763 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75224452956 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2519106022 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244209907743 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954796449638 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309688054967 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144327080685 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276011998121 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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