Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although it is sometimes thought that personal and professional life during leisure time should be maintained separate, other people think it could be helpful in their career. In my opinion, I believe we should not mix both because it could bring serious issues.
On the one hand, there are multiple common issues experienced when professional stuff enters into the private matters. Firstly, there is increase in number of sexual harassment cases getting reported where colleagues have spent leisure time together and post separation it has caused issues as work place. For example, "Me too" movement where lot of people were blamed for exploitation after so many years. Secondly, when people working in same office go for leisure time, they mostly do work related conversation and not enjoy much as compared to private time spent with family or friends. Furthermore, another serious issue could be that important office secrets are shared in personal meetings under the influence of alcohol.
On the other hand, some people are able to strike the balance between professional and personal life really well. These people take lot of benefits because of this unique ability. Admittedly, we have seen cases where supervisor and team members are well connected in their personal life and are supported by the supervisor for growth. In addition, if personal matters are shared at work place then it gives opportunity to understand each other better, and helps in reducing stress. Also, when people build strong bonding and enjoy leisure time together then it reduces conflict at work place.
To conclude, we must maintain distance between personal and professional and personal life. We should not cross the thin line as it could bring lot of serious consequences as compared to the small benefits it might give.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24315068493 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56288886307 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.603829191 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242986424943 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742531925928 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561033945406 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135865023893 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585821799481 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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