In any field of Endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by the past achievements in that field.
Here , the statement asserts that , in any field it is impossible to give an significant contribution withou having being influenced by the past achievements. In general , I diasgree with the conclusion of the statement because this conclusion will not be able to justify every facets of contibution made in any era .
At first, we need to make a general definition of the significant contribution that has to be made by any person. A significant contribution might a discovery of any field in the world or it may be a extention of any previously held theory or achievement in any field. If the contribution is given in any new field then getting influenced by its past achievements is not an option. Because if the field is new then is there is no theory or any postulates regardind that field in the past. Hence, the conclusion of the statement depends on the way a contribution is taken.
Moreover, It is also possible that one can achieve a better conclusion or findings of a previously known field which has a more profound foundation in the past without looking or knowing about the achievements of the past. For example, if a student is studying in any college and have more interest in study can achieve something great which is not found by many skilled scientist or many researcher.
On the other hand, one has to look on the different facet also. It is next to impossible to attain a praise worthy advancement in The new Quantum theory which is the extension of the conclusion posited by Sir Einstien . In such kind of field, where the conclusion of previous theory is extended for a better enhancement of that field or conclusion one always neeed to have a better knowlege about the previous theory.
Accordindly, if one talk about the past theories , the time back then was prime age for new theories and discoveries in the world. As, stated about the Quantum theory stated by Sir Einstien , back then there was no reference for them to get a knowlege form still they gave such revolutionary theories and conclusion which is used by us right now .
Conclusively, One can say that it is not always important for anyone to have a proper insight of past achivement in any field in which we have to make a significant contribution . It can be done with or without the help of past achievments .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, then, as to, for example, in general, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92000650361 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434243176179 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9137873585 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.625 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1875 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415803008526 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159944057721 0.0831039109588 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131393479171 0.0758088955206 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228378471202 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161671757872 0.0667264976115 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.