International tourism has enormous benefits at the same time it has some concerns for local inhabitants and the environment. Do the advantages of international tourism outweigh disadvantages.
The role of tourism in the world today is widely debated. Some people think that the disadvantages outwieghs the advantages. I am partially agree with this and explain in the upcoming paragraphs.
The first and formest, reason is increased tourism may break the social cohesion in the local community. Many people make a living by providing services for travellers and become rich while many others remain poor and struggle for the next meal. So, it has detrimental impacts on the bond and the shared values of the individuals. Secondly, many people visit the place, the maintenance of the place becomes very difficult for the government. For instance- people throw away rubbish like plastic bags, empty food packets and cans that are dangerous to the local environment.
Thirdly, tourism cause adverse effects on the pristine environment and creatures living there. Forests may be cut down to make way for resorts and hotels. Also, marine life might be threatened due to water pollution and birds have to find other places to inhabit. For example- a survey was conducted by world health organization proved that people lived nearest tourist places are more prone to suffering from diseases than the others lived far away.
On the other hand, the tourism industry is vital for some countries. People rely on tourism for their income. Tourism attracts investment from governments and companies. It creates employmemt due to demand for goods and services.
Finally, as per my opinion, toursim offers a vast number of employment opportunities but it has more adverse effects on the environment and living creatures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22605363985 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67378053187 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.624360757 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2352941176 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173546365948 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603062957684 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501048827354 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929201962619 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679865434475 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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