Essay topics:
descibe a place you like
In my thinking no place more beautiful than Pirate island. This is a place not influence of the city too much. So The boat or ship is one of vehicle helpful for you to want to go there. it takes about one hour to move from city to private island. In the island, you can hear clearly the sound of wind and waves hit the shore.
In addition, it will be amazing If you riding along of the island in the morning and seeing the sky waking up. one more reason, it makes private island becoming special than other island that water in here is clear and can change in one day. I like living here it gives me energy too: always excited and have a good mood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...le helpful for you to want to go there. it takes about one hour to move from city ...
^^
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and. In the island, you can hear clearly the sound of wind and waves hit the shor...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 524.0 937.175257732 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 128.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09375 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.8946882989 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671875 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 172.8 290.88556701 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4039244016 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157809223513 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668952257884 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401729000358 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119065842883 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381798377867 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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