Nowadays more and more people want to live by themselves. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative trend?
It is said that the number of people who prefer living on their own to living with others is skyrocketing in western countries. In this essay, I will discuss the transition from rural communities to modern industrial cities and the rise of economic development. From my point of view, such a trend is quite positive.
After the industrial revolution society has changed. Many people moved to cities to find a job and start a career. The number of marriages has dropped dramatically because professional development comes now before marriage. And while the former is still dropping, the number of divorces has risen. According to statistics, the majority of solo households are divorced or single people. Thus, this social change has contributed to the rise of solo dwellers. In addition, due to the rise of economic wellbeing, more people can now afford to live on their own. In fact, according to economists, single-person households spend 153 per cent more on rent than those who live in shared houses.
There are some good points in living alone. Firstly, despite the common belief that solo dwellers are lonely, there is evidence that they have more social connections and no less happy than those who are married. Secondly, because the rise of solo dwellers is directly related to the rise of economic wellbeing, I would assume that the former is a positive happening. Lastly, the number of marriages has dropped dramatically, and there is a positive correlation between the rise of solo dwellers and cases of women victims of domestic violence. Hence, I would see the rise of solo dwellers as a positive thing.
In conclusion, cultural changes and economic wellbeing have led many people to live by themselves. Marriages have dropped and solo dwellers have increased. I believe that this trend is positive because it is directly related to wellbeing and inversely related to domestic violence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09584664537 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7822835544 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498402555911 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2578255843 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9473684211 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196243226419 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557755828997 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491461680066 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121235569127 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226470978112 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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