Sport is one of the most popular draws on television today. Some people argue that the practice of showing sport on television is to blame for the poor health of the young generation by encouraging them to watch rather than partake in physical activity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is true that sport has become one of the most entertaining television shows these days. A group of people believe that these sports shows have negative effects on the young people, as they prefer to watch those games on television rather than exercising. To a certain point, I would agree with the statement, but I also believe that it depends on the personality of each individual.
On the one hand, it is a fact that the number of sports channels has increased rapidly in the past recent years. Cable channels such as ESPN, Ten Sports, Star Sports, Fox Sports and ASN are showing 24 hours of attractive sports games all around the world. As a consequence, many young people are staying in front of the television for a number of hours just to watch these games. The condition gets worst as they are also consuming unhealthy food such as popcorn, candies and soda when they watch the shows. Therefore, a lot of people believe that these channels have been the main cause of bad health condition of young generation nowadays.
On the other hand, these sports programs should not be blamed as the only reason for the bad health conditions among the youngsters, as there are other factors which affect the health of the young people. Firstly, many parents do not teach their children about the healthy lifestyle. They are letting their children watch television for a number of hours and eating junk foods which would have a negative effect on the children. Secondly, it really depends on the personality of each individual. Some young people understand about the bad effect of watching television for such a long hours, but others just do not care about it. Therefore, sports channels would only be one of the factors that affect the health condition of the young people.
In conclusion, to a certain extent, I would agree that sports programs might have some negative effects on the health condition of the young people. As these channels show entertaining games continuously, many teenagers spend more time in watching the shows rather than exercising. However, I also believe that sports shows would only be one of the factors because the disciplinary attitude of the individual and the way parents educate their children would also affect the health condition of the youth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...condition of young generation nowadays. On the other hand, these sports programs...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
... of watching television for such a long hours, but others just do not care about it. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88917525773 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52528266855 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417525773196 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2368325482 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.588235294 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8235294118 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30153312312 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10679256102 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729163020213 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2101217166 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315655476016 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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