Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
It is a widely supported controversy among the people which one is more enjoyable either attending the live performances or enjoy the programs on the televisions. Some people don't have any interest to go to the live events although others are very enthusiastic about going to enjoy the concerts, sporting events. I think that live performance inspires to feel the cold blood of the crowds, and television program barely capable of giving that moment. Thus, my next sentences will explore the reasons to bolster the live performances as much enjoyable.
First and foremost, live performances such as concert pave the of watching the artist from the very close. Then I can read the mind of the artist what he wants to say by his voice. Moreover, live dance performances also convey some messages about the social taboo, and only live viewers can comprehend and feel the learning. Sometimes, the large crowd in a sporting event can give the breathtaking and emotional moments which cannot be obtained from the television programs.
Secondly, live concerts, programs can gather the closest persons, friends, and family members. Sometimes, these meetings bring s happier moment, as a result, I can remove the mental stresses. There are many people who don't have time to pass a holiday with their family members, I think attending such programs can help them to remove the loneliness.
Furthermore, watching television all day long can be boring, and annoying. If we can go out for some hours, we can refresh our minds. Also, these programs are a good source of learning. We can flourish our skill by following the styles of the relentless trying of the performers.
In essence, the aforesaid issues show that there are lots of good sides of enjoying live performances. On the other hand, it has some downsides but the benefits such as gathering with a crowd, realizing, learning from the celebrities outweigh the drawbacks. So, I'm always in favor of enjoying live programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, i think, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05810397554 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73775979152 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581039755352 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3723754188 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177586310221 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545752846694 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453045735703 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943969272133 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606975520603 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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