As a result of growth in some urban centres, the environment in those cities is deteriorating.
How could this issue be tackled by both the government and individuals?
In modern society, devastating of the<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre=""></span> environment in the city is one of the most considerable issue and how we all human beings protect it is always controversial. In this essay, I shall suggest how the government and people should keep the environment.
To begin with, there are many ways to discuss this environmental topic. In my opinion, the easiest method that people can do individually is that they can avoid driving the car. The air pollution is the most serious environmental issue in the city and its cause is mostly the car's emission. In fact, researchers argue that if people completely stop utilizing the car, greenhouse gas will be cut down by 40 per cent and air pollution will be much alleviated. And also, this environmental issue will increase the number of people who suffer from pulmonary diseases such as asthma and lung cancer. Therefore, I believe that the most effective way to keep the environment individually is that people decrease the use of the car which emits harmful gas such as CO2.
Secondly, what the government can do is that they should secure more expenses and subsidize the company or organization which help to improve the environmental problem. For example, in Japan, the government spend money on the car industry to encourage them to positively invent the environmentally friendly car such as the powered by electricity and this project has made a significant progress thanks to the governmental support.
In conclusion, in this essay, I discussed what the government and people can do to conserve the environment. In my opinion, the decrease in the usage of the car which produces harmful gas is the most effective measure that both government and people can do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22299651568 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.82811883335 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533101045296 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.496177236 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.916666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15991732709 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633151820797 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275008246561 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100505188376 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036235574824 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.