Some people believe in the era of e-technology, printing newspaper and magazines will cease to occur in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Modern ways of acquisition of news and disparate stories, these days, is gaining popularity among many people. While a few people think that digital media will replace conventional newspapers and magazines, others believe in contrast. In my opinion, I completely agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, one of the most evident reasons for preference of e-tech over traditional methods is the flexibility it offers. In other words, digital communication could be used any time of the day. As reading is a sort of activity that people usually do in their leisure time; therefore, the internet has given this option to read at night or early morning, depending on the availability of a reader. Whereas, printed newspapers and magazines may not provide this flexible alternative.
Another important point to consider is the presence of up-to-date information on web. This is because all news and recent development are invariably updated as soon as they are confirmed. Conventional reading material, on the other hand, is outdated usually. To illustrate, the guardian, which is a very well-known online magazine, keeps its news stories updated after every fifteen minutes. As a result, people around the world read it regularly
Furthermore, cost is also an essential parameter to consider. The cost of colored-printed magazines and newspapers is often extremely high because printing requires heavy machines. These expenses are passed down to the customers. According to the recent article, published on BBC News, more than 80 per cent of avid readers prefer online reading due to the free availability of material on it.
In summary, medium of world-web for news is becoming increasingly popular among an inordinate number of people because it gives flexible and latest news option. Moreover, due to free online info, people opt for it, instead of obsolete methods of getting news. It is predicted that this trend would increase in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he free availability of material on it. In summary, medium of world-web for news...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in contrast, in summary, sort of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31290322581 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90152100484 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641935483871 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8720174781 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2777777778 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120429483156 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361104855389 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491071187943 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656138295588 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315585130291 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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