The Renaissance
The Renaissance marked the transition from the medieval to the modern world.Generally,the Renaissance refers to the period between the 14th and mid 17th centuries.It first started in Italy,with the flowering of painting,sculpture and literature.From Italy the movement went to embrace the rest of Europe.The Renaissance,which means rebirth or revival,is actually a movement stimulated by a series of historical events,such as the rediscovery of ancient Roman and Greek culture,the new discoveries in geography and astrology,the religious reformation and the economic expansion.In terms of artistic expression,he inherited and developed the three traditions of ancient Greek and Roman,medieval England and Renaissance European drama,and innovated creatively from content to form.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 43.0788530466 5% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 1977.66487455 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 407.700716846 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.34905660377 4.8611393121 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 4.48103885553 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.98592441594 2.67179642975 149% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 212.727598566 34% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.524837075471 129% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 618.680645161 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.51630824373 132% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 106.0 20.1344086022 526% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 673.0 100.406767564 670% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 106.0 20.6045352989 514% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.45110844103 440% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201194675585 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201194675585 0.076458572812 263% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201194675585 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 61.5 11.7677419355 523% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -69.95 58.1214874552 -120% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 49.3 10.1575268817 485% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 20.73 10.9000537634 190% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.04 8.01818996416 200% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 71.0 10.002688172 710% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 44.4 10.0537634409 442% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.247311828 605% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.4 Out of 6.0
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.