Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, in our developed country, we have too many options to choose for our life like our studying, our job or something like that. For me, I think this statement is definitely true and in my essay, I will outline the reason for why I accept.
On the other hand, we are having a variety of choices and they will decide our life. For example with just our studying, we can decide what school we want to go or who our teacher is, this all depend on our decision. Having many choices will help us have benefit, such as buying clothes, using courses or other things from different brands, functions, features. People who want to catch up with the trends and fashion will waste their money on these things while they are unnecessary and insignificant. In result, we will be tired and get no special thing to highlight our personal.
On the other hand, with loads of choices, we will know what is the true path for our life and we can be successful and comfortable if we choose right. But this will lead to a result that it hard for us to identify our true passion, our true wish. Also, we can change our opinion easily because we don’t believe in our choice 100 percent so we can be affected by other opinions from other people including people who want to harm us.
In conclusion, choices is a good way for us to identify our personal character but we can be affected if we have too many choices. I suggest that we should trust ourselves and choose the right ways intelligently and carefully. Because this will cause the change in our life, which should be good or ba
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...successful and comfortable if we choose right. But this will lead to a result that it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47750865052 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40587217584 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522491349481 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3856203023 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134998686859 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605666170939 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498147457462 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982829351695 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213039948397 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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