You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Dear Sir,
To the Editor,
I am a highly standing member of our local association and I have purpose to write a recommendation to other family in our district about dining establishment; The Lone Star Cafe.
The restaurant have interesting interior when I entranced, and they decorated the room with flowers and carving is like green house. I specifically enjoyed the atmosphere of the place. Although, place manage is the best, but for my mind it had great taste of the food that was memorable.
I motivated to write my recommendation because they had professional service, and along with the quality of the dishes served. I loved a steak of mammoth proportions and a giant fresh and crisp salad as appetizer with good composition make a delicious accompaniment by selection of appropriately selected seasonal vegetables. For dessert, they had the rich Black Forest gateau served-and all for fair price.
I hope after reading the information, potential customers will frequent to try the restaurant - Bon appetite.
Yours truly.
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Sentence: The restaurant have interesting interior when I entranced, and they decorated the room with flowers and carving is like green house.
Description: The fragment I entranced , is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace entranced with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
they decorated the room with flowers and carving is like green house.
they decorated the room with flowers and carving which like a green house.
Sentence: Although, place manage is the best, but for my mind it had great taste of the food that was memorable.
Description: The fragment place manage is is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace manage with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: I motivated to write my recommendation because they had professional service, and along with the quality of the dishes served.
Description: The fragment I motivated to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace motivated with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 160 200
No. of Characters: 809 1000
No. of Different Words: 112 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.557 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.056 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.095 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.228 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.125 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.408 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.701 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4