Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People of the world have so many different dieting regimens. While some enjoy eating meat and fish, others prefer to only consume vegetables and fruit with the addition of animal products in some cases. This particular group of people believe that not eating animal meat is highly beneficial to their bodies and to the environment as well. I personally disagree with that notion, but in this essay both views will be discussed.
On the one hand, some individuals consider slaughtering or catching animals for human consumption is very cruel since the animal is a free creature that should not be controlled or killed by people. Furthermore, they believe animal protein causes an increase in the level of amino acids in the blood which in turn causes some diseases such as hypertension and Gout. Another reason that is cited by advocates of that lifestyle is the fact that an Ecosystem is already in balance and does not require human intervention. Consequently, when people start catching or slaughtering animals they are disturbing that balance.
On the other hand, those who are comfortable with eating meat or fish believe that it is a right for every human being since those domesticated animals are being kept and fed in order to be used as food. Slaughtering cows, lambs, goats or chicken is a practice that has been carried out for centuries. However, It is fair to say that such practice has not disturbed the balance of the ecosystem. Also, animals slaughter is done in a painless and humane way so it can be argued that it is not extremely cruel after all.
In conclusion, following a vegetarian or a vegan diet is a personal choice for some who think it ripe with benefits for themselves and the world. However, I tend to disagree with their point of view and conveniently enjoy eating fish and meat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
People of the world have so many different dieting regimens. While some enjoy eati...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable eating'.
Suggestion: comfortable eating
...ce. On the other hand, those who are comfortable with eating meat or fish believe that it is a right...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, after all, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85530546624 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68648699874 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546623794212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9305658951 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210450833052 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725050595839 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479852779631 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13892149325 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596202477964 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.