Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are different opinions on whether all university students should be required to take history courses or not. As with everything, there are always two sides of every question. Some people hold the opinion that all students should take history classes. Others, of course, strongly disagree that all students should learn history even though their field of studies is different.
I, myself agree with the former because all students should have the opportunity to learn history and also in any field of study history is very important.
To begin with, students should have the opportunity to learn history at school. The best time to learn history is during the university because at that phase of life students understand better the complex concepts of the past, and their curiosity and desire to know more about the past is higher at that time. By understanding the decisions that our ancestors have made in the past they can learn from those and not repeat again the same mistakes that they have made at that time. If schools programs do not involved history, then the majority of students would never have the opportunity or the time to study history on their own, unless they love history so much. That is why, I think that the university as a institution should have history included in their curriculum, so every student will have the chance to study about the past.
Furthermore, another point that should be consider is that by studying history in university they would find out if they would continue for further studies on this field or not. For instance, One of my friends, wanted to continue his education on history. But his university did not have the history on curriculum, so he had to find another university that had that program. he was frustrated because he wanted to go to the university that was close to his home. Consequently, he has to go to another state just because the university which is close to his home do not have that program. If all universities offer history courses then it would be easier for students to chose the universities they they like. Because of this, i strongly suggest that universities should include history in their curriculum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
... past they can learn from those and not repeat again the same mistakes that they have made a...
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Line 5, column 711, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... is why, I think that the university as a institution should have history include...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the past. Furthermore, another point that should be consider is that by study...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...thermore, another point that should be consider is that by studying history in universi...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...other university that had that program. he was frustrated because he wanted to go ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
... for students to chose the universities they they like. Because of this, i strongly sugge...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...include history in their curriculum. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, then, as to, for instance, i think, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57445811765 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454301075269 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3107685208 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.588235294 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291795186868 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120447709595 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849426660916 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220651124471 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792089292767 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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